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Susanne Lohkamp's avatar

I like the clue of using the ratty brown scarf with the bright blue and white to show the reader that the situation is not how it seems to Sam.

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David Margolin's avatar

Thanks for your comment, Susanne.

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Richard Schechter's avatar

Nice surprise ending! And the photo is perfect!

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David Margolin's avatar

Hi Richard, thanks for your comment.

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John Cummings's avatar

David - thanks so much for sharing your writing with us, I really enjoy your work!

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